Re-read your screenplay and ask yourself these questions :
1. Are the parts castable? Does the film have roles that stars will want to play?
2. Action and humor should emanate from the characters, and not just thrown in for the sake of a laugh. Comedy which violates the integrity of the characters or oversteps the reality-world of the film may get a laugh, but it will ultimately unravel the picture. Don't break the fourth wall, no matter how tempting.
3. Audiences want to see characters who car...
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